dislikes about the book crank

I dislike how the book is written because sometimes its hard to understand what is going on; here's why the book is written like a bunch of poems. Sometimes when I am reading the book I have to read the page again, because it doesn't make any sense. I would like the book much better if it wasn't written the way it is but overall its a good book.

Problem Solving

If I could solve one problem in the book Crank, I would solve the problem that this girls dad in the book is a complete stranger to her and I would like to solve that problem. Because it kinda sucks having that problem in the story.

Crank: Altered Perception

In the story Crank I would like to change Bree's dad, because he is like a total stranger to her and I would like Bree to be able to know her dad. Bree's dad had nothing to do with her in 8 years. it would be nice to for her and her dad.